Has really good potential
I thought it was doing really good cuz I thought it was funny, but then you just kept repeating yourself at the end that just bugged the heck out of me. The music is pretty good, but mainly cuz I like bass. But if you were to remake this, I would get rid of the repeats, maybe insert something else in there. I actually thought the animation and was went well with the song. So props to that even thought its clearly not the best graphically wise. Also the constant black white black white black white thing was kind of hurting my eyes along with the repeats. But that is all I have to say guy. Keep it up.
my hot dog
has a first name
and its oscar
my hot dog has a second name
I'm not quite sure what those programs are so I'm sure you did your best in the animation that you could do. Yes it is a bit choppy but it's still very amazing. But you did a great job on pretty much re-animating the beginning of the movie. To all who have not seen the movie, that is the intro. The rest of the story is great and exciting. The movie itself is a bit humorous and scary at the same time. StringAnime did a great job on doing this and I look forward to seeing your stuff. I'm subscribing.
I for one love the paper Mario series and the first was one was my favorite. Seeing this brought back old memories. It was really well done and the animation replicates the real paper Mario. I'm looking forward to the rest of the series.
So the concept is nice and I believe it will help a lot of people.
This might be the error or glitch that you are referring too, but when I went to type the letters, it did not read them very well. I was actually forced to type slower than normal, and sometimes it still would not register. I am sure you are fixing this problem now and I know it will come out good. But for now this is just annoying to me. I just can't stand it not registering. But anyway I look forward to the final result.
I really want to play the game, it looks really fun, but every time I click story mode, it takes me to the "how to play" screen and I can't get past it. I looked at what you said to ProntoOne, and I cannot find the x in the middle anywhere. Plus the "press down" is off the screen and I can't see what it says. I don't know if its a weird bug or what but for some reason its happening. I will try again later but for now its just not working. Since I have not been able to play the game yet I will give 5 for graphics. But I look forward to playing this game.
So yeah, first off you really can't lose at the game until the timer gets to zero. The timer starts at 99 and goes down maybe 2.5 seconds per real second when not shooting at a bear. Plus I got to 653 and could have gotten more but my finger hurt. If you shoot say the left bear and then the middle one, and go back to shoot the left one, they both die and you can keep clicking repeatedly. They just constantly re spawn and you you keep getting points. This is not supposed to be bashing your game dude, I'm just trying to point out some problems for constructive criticism. The bear explosion is decent but their animation for moving is lacking. They only stand in one spot and move their arms. And if possible make it so the bears appear to come from over the hills cuz they just appear in the front. Other than that I think the game is fine. So fix the timer, the click glitch, and some animation. I hope this helps.
BTW, I have the real game it is pretty fun. Highly suggest the real deal.
Sounds bad, looks bad, no taste at all, and looks like it was made by a 1st grader.
My suggestion is that you work a lot harder on the music and find more pleasing sounds. all of them sounded really annoying. The music that you had on their that looped was bad. Maybe you will do well one day
Hahahaha, okay mr drum set man. How bout you quit being a debby downer and actually go make a good flash? Just because I gave you a bad review, you gave me one? Grow up dude. And btw, an audio submission can't LOOK bad. Nice job on copying and pasting my review.
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